Blog Assignment #6

In the essay the publication of your personal profile, some of praphrase and quote from other sources support the structure of each paragraph. The question is how they are effact to the essay, or what does it means in overall of the essay. As general, it support to be more specific and more special information to be given as clear meaning of the essay. Follwed the one of paraphrase and one of quote displays as an example.
"MySpace and Facebook began to skyrocekt in popularity after they were launched in 2004 and 2004 respectly. The largest social networking website MySpae has approximately 230,000 new users join every day. In a short year between 2005 and 2006, the amount of users boosted the site's popularity by 367 percent" It was written by the Publication of Your Personal Profile as paraharse from other sources. As the facts to show the needed data for this essay, it displays the increasing usage of social networking. Followed the numbers of statistics, the information or background of main idea can be expliained.
Quote by Springer, "the committe reviewing the images could take a different view"explains one of examples that profile of Facebook is good or bad. One of examples which the autor used was RA from Delware University posted the pictures of themselves drinking on their facebook. Withing this prospective, their private living life will be shown to the people who visit the internet communities and university is not prefer to be show as like that, especially as the leader of community; the RA is supposed to show a good example of students. Unlike this example, the quote by Springer supports another view of the phenomena as good example which was Miss New Jersey, Amy Plmubo. The suggestive of her pictures tells visitor in the internet communitiy about her normal life, not as her special career.

Blog Assignment #5

General Soon Shin in Josun Dynasty, 100 years ago in Korea, was a hero but not in Japan. Followed the history, Japan and Korea was a rival like Tom and Jerry. They invaded and plundered each other. For instance, If Japan made a war, and then Korea made war next time. Through those frightened history, Soon Shin was a big hero but he was also terrorist in Japan. Followed what he did for Korea, He had victories against the Japanese navy during the Japanese invasions of Korea during the wars. His title of Naval Commander of the Three Provinces notified as the title of the commander of the managing arm of the Korean navy until 1896. He is also known for his invitation of the turtle ship which is big issues in Korea, also in Japan .He is famed to have been victorious in every naval battle in which he commanded.
Instead of what a surprising he did, Japanese have totally different idea from what Koreans think. The reason probably is General Soon Shin gave a victory to Korea however he also gave reversal to Japan. Most wars between them, he always brought triumph to Korea. As this instance, the same fact sometimes brings different meaning to each.