Blog Assignment #6

In the essay the publication of your personal profile, some of praphrase and quote from other sources support the structure of each paragraph. The question is how they are effact to the essay, or what does it means in overall of the essay. As general, it support to be more specific and more special information to be given as clear meaning of the essay. Follwed the one of paraphrase and one of quote displays as an example.
"MySpace and Facebook began to skyrocekt in popularity after they were launched in 2004 and 2004 respectly. The largest social networking website MySpae has approximately 230,000 new users join every day. In a short year between 2005 and 2006, the amount of users boosted the site's popularity by 367 percent" It was written by the Publication of Your Personal Profile as paraharse from other sources. As the facts to show the needed data for this essay, it displays the increasing usage of social networking. Followed the numbers of statistics, the information or background of main idea can be expliained.
Quote by Springer, "the committe reviewing the images could take a different view"explains one of examples that profile of Facebook is good or bad. One of examples which the autor used was RA from Delware University posted the pictures of themselves drinking on their facebook. Withing this prospective, their private living life will be shown to the people who visit the internet communities and university is not prefer to be show as like that, especially as the leader of community; the RA is supposed to show a good example of students. Unlike this example, the quote by Springer supports another view of the phenomena as good example which was Miss New Jersey, Amy Plmubo. The suggestive of her pictures tells visitor in the internet communitiy about her normal life, not as her special career.